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David Norling's avatar

Fantastic! Well done!

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Jennifer Savran Kelly's avatar

Thank you!

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Victor Wolf's avatar

This is great. Creepy, poignant, and I also couldn't stop laughing at imagery of the inflatable dad.

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Ken Langer's avatar

Jennifer, this is a truly wonderful, multilayered, gripping story about gender, male domination. The image of the inflatable dad is haunting, as is the relationship between Paul and the "doll". Good work!!!

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Jennifer Savran Kelly's avatar

Thanks so much!!

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