"Bill had been working checkpoints with Carson for a week, and so far no one had come up red. A few people had come up yellow... but it turned out those people had just been having a bad day."
Great stuff, I love this kind of winding, flowing narrative.
A sidewinder of a story - moving in unexpected yet natural ways!
Incredible story!
Great stuff, I love this kind of winding, flowing narrative.
A sidewinder of a story - moving in unexpected yet natural ways!
Incredible story!