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Karen G Berry's avatar

Gorgeous story.

Glenna Turnbull's avatar

Beautifully told story. Thanks for posting this.

Jgood's avatar

So moving. So intruiging. All the details woven together so that it's seamless. I'll remember this one.

Alex Merola's avatar

I enjoyed the story more and more as I reached the end. Your sentences seemed fluid, like a ghost floating before my eyes. A horror story, yes, but more melancholy for me. Thank you.