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Slacker's Muse's avatar

It’s hard to write like… topical, relevant shit without coming across as heavy handed or over-dramatic. It’s good for people to do it though, I think.

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Audrey Marshall's avatar

The voice of this one was very grounding, very intimate. Really served the story well.

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Joseph Young's avatar

maybe an obvious comment but the addition of the dei van guys takes this story from really good to crushing. good work, y'all.

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Charlotte Hamrick's avatar

Really hits home how, more and more, people are dehumanizing each other.

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Sheldon Birnie's avatar

Loved this one, you guys

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Kevin M. Kearney's avatar

Damn, Jeff

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Jim Ruland's avatar

Perfect title for a stunner of a story.

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Sarah Holloway's avatar

I admire how creatively structured this story is. And what a bold heart beats at its center! Don't miss this one. As for me, I'm going hunting for Jeff Chon's story collection.

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Vartan Koumrouyan's avatar

Boring

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steve chang's avatar

losers love to out themselves

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Vartan Koumrouyan's avatar

Yeah, still, it’s a quality I have acquired that I blame on my short attention span and inability to concentrate on protracted fiction, but i’m getting slowly better understanding the real me.

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